Story ideas - Initial
So here I am with my first set of ideas. At first I thought about uploading really rough quick ideas but in hindsight it will be better to upload slightly worked ideas to help give them a formed shape, however I'm still only on the rough initial idea stage at the moment. Some ideas are less worked on than others because I'm trying to get all my ideas out before I forget. Also, I want to dip into character backstories to give these ideas more depth. So here they are:
Logline: The dim Window Cleaner succumbs to the tricks of the witty Fish.
Conflict: The Fish wants to become an obstacle for the Window Cleaner.
Goal: To clean the Windows of the dilapidated Morgue.
The Window Cleaner is busy working on his latest assignment. The refurbishment of the Town's old run down morgue. He starts cleaning the windows and tries to ignore the fact that this place is deserted and very eerily quiet. Time slowly slips away. Suddenly he hears a noise that brings his attention off from his work and onto his surroundings. He looks around violently before he laughs to himself at the thought of being scared by a noise and turns back to carry on cleaning his windows. Moments later he hears another noise, much louder and with more conviction than its predecessor, followed by demonic shadows. This scares the life out of the Window Cleaner and drives him to sprint ruthlessly as fast as he can to the exit, he looks behind him as he nears closer and closer, he turns his head and collides into his freshly cleaned glass doors. The impact of the blow knocks the helpless Window Cleaner out. Whilst the character is sprawled out on the dirt ridden floor, the camera tracks away from the scene and starts to trace back to the origin of the supernatural activity. It moves through the twists and turns of the room. The camera track stops at the foot of a dusty Fishbowl with the inhabitant laughing hysterically with his fins moving in a wierd way, it dawns on the audience that the fish was the one creating the shadows and the noises.
|Klaus the fish from American Dad would be a close influence.|